Analysis of Taking Off



frantic wing
 cutting wind
 chilling brow
 blurring ground
 shortening runway

shrinking shadow
 straining frame
 torturing heart
 failing spirit
 faltering faltering

upward springing!
 existence spanned
 in one bright arc
 a leaping rainbow
 soaring soaring soaring

o may I live
 thus slicing air
 and when my time comes
 so may I die
 with whole heart
 still springing upward


Scheme AXXXX BXCXA AXXBA XXXXCX
Poetic Form
Metre 101 101 101 101 1001 101 101 1001 1010 100100 1010 0101 0111 0101 101010 1111 1101 01111 1111 111 11010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 356
Words 56
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 6
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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