Analysis of The eye of heaven



There it is rising over the eastern horizon,
ripping the dark night of the heavens:
Cleaving the night for the day...
telling all the other stars it's time to go away.

Making a path for the Eye of Heaven,
as its rays flash brightly, chasing afore it the night.
It's flash speeds across the whole skyline so bright,
so quickly...gone the stars...now comes the light.

Sitting on the lawn, next to a clear-water lake
I watch the morning glories raise their sleepy heads:
Emerald green glows the grass as the colors bled
into the blue of the lake, shimmering reflection it's wake.

I wonder why everyone talks about perfect this and that.
Never looking at the Glorious, artistic lights of Creation,
that every morning paints a beautiful scene as colors react:
As The Eye of Heaven walks dreaming this day's imagination.
Mitakuye Oyasin!  Aho!


Scheme AXBB ACCC DXXD XAXAX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010010010 100111010 101101 1010101111101 1001101110 111110101101 1110101111 1101101 101011101101 110101011101 10110110101 010110110001011 11011010101101 10101010001011010 11001010100111001 101110110110010 1110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 821
Words 146
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 165
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lucian Tower

I began writing Lyrics, short stories, and poetry some 43-years-ago. When I was in high school, during the 60s, I met the great Robert Frost. He spoke to me about my real elementary attempts at writing and poetry. He took some time with me, after assembly hall and told me to not stop writing. Now, that I have been around the world as a USMarine, and have lived through 2-years of the Vietnam War, I still am writing. Now at 63-years-old, I am enjoying being on Poetry.com with you all. I was born 12/21/1948, in Worcester, MA. There I began trying to write lyrics at 5-years-old, on my Grandmother's piano -- this has been a life-time ambition/Hobby for me. I live now in Gallatin, TN, and I am disabled/retired from the vietnam war.This is how I move around and, hopefully, meet others of like mind/spirit. I am mostly American Indian and 4th Generation Irish in the USA. My poetry are moments, which I've seen, and lived during my life. I believe allpoetry are photos, or glimpses into moments of life. Styles have changed over the years, and it is in reading/listening to others' poems that give poets ideas and imaginations to build their own style. This is who I am, as a man, who simply loves the written arts/preforming arts. Keep on writing!Lucian Tower. more…

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