Analysis of The Heart beat




Within my left breast,
Lies my beating heart,
Wonderful sound to my ears,
Encasing bright, eternal hopes.

My beating heart
That beats so that I may sleep and have good dreams,
My beating heart
That beats so that I may experience untainted love and be comforted around the clock.
 Miracles occur from such love;

Our precious lil babe
Borne from two hearts but with its own,
This filial tie that is ever so binding,
Will continue to ensure
A love that remains magical
As our hearts will forever be one.


Scheme xaxx AxAxx xxxxxx
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 01111 11101 1001111 110101 1101 11111110111 1101 11111101000101011000101 10001111 101011 11111111 110011110110 1010101 01101100 1101101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 487
Words 90
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 6
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 133
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on September 15, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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