Analysis of The one i need.



You make my heart glow
You make me enjoy life as it goes
When your in my arms,
time may stop
but my love will not.
As you walk out my door
Im wishing you here more and more
Because without you life is such a bore.
My love for my aswell be a law,
Because i will love you forever
No matter time nor weather
Be with me
Always please
Because you are the one...
that I need.


Scheme ABCDEFFFGHHIJKL
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 11111 111011111 11011 111 11111 111111 11011101 0101111101 11111101 011111010 1101110 111 11 011101 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 355
Words 79
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 283
Words per stanza (avg) 79
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Submitted on April 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Riley Taylor

Not much to say... Umm, Im 14... and i play the flute, so my mate calls me a bard :3 poetry has been my way of expression since i was 7, and it has changed into my was of life now. Im glad you guys can shre it with me (: Uhh, i play futsal for Queensland, hoping to play for Autralia one day. more…

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