Analysis of the re-creation
3. THE RE-CREATION---DR.KGB
O my mom, how sweet you are!
Thy lullaby, thy voice, fragrance more!
O my reminiscence, the nectar, the fore,
Thy caressing, feel, my poetic intuit core!
Singing a million, tone and tune,
Stringing the diamond lute of mine,
I know well, the real and fine-
The golden strings of love are thine!
Still I try to teach your sing,
The breeze to hum, the wind to ring,
All the worlds fourteen or more,
Round the clock, notes core-
Dawn-dusk ding dong!
How happy I am, thy words,
Are echoing high to the paradise!
O my humble feeble voice,
May be my feel, deep the woods!
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7-5-2012
Note-
Mom= My Mother-tongue (Malayalam- Indian)
Most of my English Poems are re-creations of my Malayalam poems
- (published& well-read in Keralam & to be published soon)
(Nascent Poetry)
| Scheme | X XAAA BCCC DDAAX XXXX XXXXBX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Tetractys (28%) |
| Metre | 010101 1111111 11011101 1101001001 1010110100101 10010101 10010111 1110101 01011111 1111111 01110111 1011111 10111 1111 1101111 110011010 1110101 1111101 1 1 1 111011100 11110101101011110 10110111101 10100 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 789 |
| Words | 141 |
| Sentences | 10 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 4, 4, 5, 11 |
| Lines Amount | 25 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 119 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 28 |
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Submitted on June 10, 2012
Modified on March 05, 2023
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