Analysis of The Saddest Song



Once upon a time in the land of Nod
 that's just east of Eden and west of God
 there was a drought throughout the realm,
 the king called his viziers to the helm.

"Summon the artists from far and near,
 each singer, poet and balladeer,
 find one who can write the saddest song,
 this drought has lasted far too long."

Thus was a masterpiece of tragedy born,
 the heartstrings of all the people torn,
 for days tears flowed o'er the countryside
 until they filled the whole river wide.

As salty currents met thirsty ocean
 fishes tears also saturated the sad potion
 and dolorous clouds were fully seeded,
 their sadness couldn't go unheeded,
 they wept in torrents, gales and floods
 replenishing the kingdom's life bloods.

Thus is our heroic poet's deed recorded
 as he was duly, richly rewarded
 with certificates of lifetime achievement
 for poetry of exquisite bereavement
 and every year on the first day of Spring
 the people of Nod this saddest song still sing.

I'm a quilted song bird
 looking through gilded bars,
 on a bold night
 I can see clear to the stars
 and remember
 the song we used to sing
 before a cold light
 in September clipped my wing.

There's a heavy heart
 within this ribbed cage,
 it weighs no less
 with the coming of old age,
 soon it will find peace
 when my door is opened wide
 and kind release
 for this song I have inside.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHIJJ HIKKLL XMNMXLNL XOXOPFPF
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 1010100111 1111100111 11010101 01111101 100101101 1101001 111110101 11110111 1101011001 01110101 111110010 011101101 1101011010 101101000110 01101010 110101010 11010101 010001011 1110010101010 1111010010 1010011010 11001100010 01001101111 01011110111 101011 101101 1011 1111101 0010 011111 01011 0010111 10101 01111 1111 1010111 11111 1111101 0101 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,354
Words 246
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 6, 6, 8, 8
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted by haiku_artist on August 21, 2014

Modified by haiku_artist on May 04, 2021

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