Analysis of The ticking



1, 2, 3, 4
the timing resonates at the door
1, 2, 3, 4
the sound continues ever more
It's getting late
and I can not think
Whatever shall I contemplate
No whirling winds nor sounds of the past
to keep my darkest thoughts in strange contrast
Missing the ticking so alone
longing for its rhythmic sound
that captivates and abound
Where has it all gone
No winding no charging no changing at all
1, 2, 3, 4
the sounds gone flat down the hall
1, 2, 3
No more!


Scheme AbAbcdceefgghiAiab
Poetic Form
Metre 1 01010101 1 01010101 1101 01111 101110 110111101 1111010110 10010101 1011101 110001 11111 11011011011 1 0111101 1 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 437
Words 90
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 352
Words per stanza (avg) 90
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Oscar Arcelious Lottihall

I am the consummate romantic with a curiosity for the darkness of life. I have been writing for most of my life. I wouldn't say that I write long poems, as a matter of fact, most are quite haiku short. I believe, as the Greeks of old, an ocean of meaning can be found in a drop of prose. more…

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