Analysis of tunneling memories



Tunneling Memories
By Rita Sabanal Laurencio
when you lie, i like you more,
you look cute, like a wounded leopard.
nature wasn't cruel, only the heart.

don't try to hold crooked branches,
a rose fire, yellow sky:
each of us has her own personal heaven
her own darknesses, wet tunnel of terrors
and factories of happiness

i like you, too, when you pay attention to your blessings,
when you kneel down to your fall-down,
when you stand and curl and cry...

silently in the dark
with your adventurous murky splash--arms open
dappled with amorous wildness.

oh, how i like you most
when you anchor your body in the light,
moving your eyelid back-and-forth,
tongue gulping limply with your own tenderness
akin to a leopard of my self-made god
perfectly glowing at the back of my corrupted flesh.


Scheme AAXXX XBCXD XXB XCD XXXDXX
Poetic Form
Metre 100100 11011 1111111 111101010 1010101001 11111010 0110101 11110110010 011110110 01001100 11111110101110 11111111 1110101 100001 110100101110 1110010 111111 1110110001 1011101 1101111100 01101011111 10010101110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 767
Words 137
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 3, 3, 6
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on December 29, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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