Analysis of walk
on the coldest of sunny winter mornings
in the soberest of sideways glances
you are unfocused and blue.
periwinkle at midnight
inviting a dip of electrons and nights spent
swimming in the depth of your perception
irises where everything floats only down.
but i smell cut grass.
oatmeal and a million girl-grandma cliches
quilts and fantasies emanated from
the wrinkle of paper stomach.
the shadow of your eyelashes will not capture me.
nor the infinite intangibility of your
chance ghost.
i will put on my stiff blue jeans, slightly
faded. developing a hole above right knee.
i cannot walk on the wake of your waters
i will imprint footprints on the dirt.
i will walk.
Scheme | ABCDEFGHIJKLMNLLOPQ |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10101101010 0011110 1101001 111 010011010011 1000111010 1001101101 11111 1001011001 101001001 01011010 01111011101 10100111 11 1111111110 100100010111 11011011110 11011101 111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 650 |
Words | 115 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 19 |
Lines Amount | 19 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 542 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 115 |
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Submitted on May 01, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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