Analysis of Wha Happen



Where'd I go?
Once I was 536 in # 12 spot;
Then I was # 49 in # 12 spot;
Then I was # 8 in # 8 Spot. AMAZING!
Now I'm number 21 in # 12 spot.
I submit poems; they never get reviewed.
I review poems, and sumbit poems; and talk about mine
And barely move.

Wha happen to me??????????????????

Where'd I go???????????????????????

What's the point to continuing??????????????????????????????????


Scheme Abbcbxxx x A c
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11101 11101 11101010 111001 10110110101 1110011001011 0101 11011 111 10110100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 379
Words 70
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 56
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on October 07, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Donald Loudon

I started to write because of the great feeling of release, and being able to do something of my own that I enjoyed. Since then, writing has become a way of life for me, and I enjoy it thoroughly. I write about things I feel strongly and or know a lot about. more…

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