Analysis of What's Wrong With You



I had a feeling for you
That i just could not hide.
Girl,don't ask me why
I did not make a move on you
In the back of mind
That is all I wanted to do
But now I am out of time
Because seeing you.I never do
So tell me what is wrong with you
And why you never come around
You never return my calls
Yet you said you wanted to be friends
Well I am calling
you are not responding
And i am talking
But you are not listening
So tell me what is wrong with you
Why you treating me the way you do
I do not understand,What is wrong with you.

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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 618
Words 125
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 19, 2
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 221
Words per stanza (avg) 61
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Paul Harmon E.

i'm from albany ny,,i have always been writing,poetry,songs etc.i am hoping to meet some poets here ,you can find me on facebook. more…

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