Analysis of Will tomorrow be my end?



It's 2100 AC
My grandfather told me that there was a time
When mother earth was still lively
He told me that there was a time
When there were places called parks
When people used to go near the ocean and have fun
When people used to play sports and be rich
When there were other continents
He said there was a state called California

He said but all these joyful moments were destroyed
By the greed of mankind
They took Global Warming for a joke
Now the earth has passed 6 degrees
Now the world I live in is the result of GW
A world were living itself is a nightmare
Hurricanes come and go like rain
Most of our forests were fire foods
It's so hot taking your shirt of is pointless
Going near the sea is like suicide
Nobody knows when the next seaquake will happen

He said gas burning was one of the main causes
Living without gas was impossible for them
Cars could only run with gases
But there were other cars
There were cars that could be driven with electricity
He heard even with water made in Japan

But because the wealthy Gas company owners didn't approve
They were never used worldwide
They were ignored like ants
Because of Global Warming
I don't know if tomorrow will be my end


Scheme ABABXCXXX XXXXAXXXXDC EXEXAX XDXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111 1101111101 11011110 11111101 1101011 1101111010011 1101111011 11010100 1111011010 111111010001 101111 111010101 1011101 101110100111 0101001101 1010111 1110100101 11110111110 101011110 111011110 111101110110 100111010011 11101110 110101 1011111010100 11101101001 1010101100101001 1010111 100111 0111010 1111011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,157
Words 226
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 9, 11, 6, 5
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 240
Words per stanza (avg) 57
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Submitted on October 16, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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