Analysis of in my mind

Karley Sarah 2001 (TX)



where have you gone
take me to where you rest
withdrawn from my peace
breathe me in

touching you softly
only in my mind
vanishing between my fingertips
you were never really here

you've taken my warmth
passing out pieces of me
I think too much
miss what we had initially


Scheme XXXX AXXX XAXA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 1111 111111 01111 110 10110 10011 10001110 1010101 11011 1011011 1111 11110100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 259
Words 51
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted by karleysarah on March 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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