Analysis of antipathy, the unreturned



intro.
don’t know about being hated,
but, I’ve never hated anyone,
mayhaps the one that come close would be me,
oh God what a bout to win.

interlude
putting a smile to everyone,
would be hard while you don’t live,
may the effort be appreciated,
and push away the unwanteds.

dump the spoilt cartons,
the ones that blight the room,
with disgust and distaste,
keep the shelf void,
rather filled,
may your soul live in peace.

like whirling flurry,
may the disquietude wane.

outro
to not like is oke,
but to hate is unseemly,
perhaps the way I was nurtured,
I came to free the animus.


Scheme AXBCX XBXXD DXXXXD CX AXCXD
Poetic Form
Metre 10 11011010 11101010 101111111 1110111 10 1001110 1111111 101010100 010101 10110 011101 101001 1011 101 111101 11010 1011 1 11111 1111010 01011110 11110100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 563
Words 106
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6, 2, 5
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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