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down down down

Evie

i cover you up
higher on volume
lower on attention
up up up
i see your mouth move
why bother
to even try to talk
up up to
stop it
stop trying to talk to me
i’m not worth it
up up up
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Written on November 06, 2021

Submitted on November 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme abcAdefghihA
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 180
Words 43
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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