When You Said Goodbye



I'll have so much pain
left inside but hopefully
you won't see it in my eyes

I'll shed a million tears
for all of your lost dreams

and inside I'll silently
screem out I'll looking
in your eyes tell you
live at you so

Always remember I loved
you the most after you leave
I'll painfully cry
this will ne what happens
when you say goodbye

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Written on August 08, 2010

Submitted by blessthismess2 on December 11, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAX XX AXXX XXBXB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 339
Words 70
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 4, 5

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