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The last day

Fhilip Yanus 2008 (Medan)

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As the fire damped,
and the tears fell.
I knew I was damned,
as if I'm stuck in a shell.

a walk in the forest,
cynicality filled me.
is this a test,
or is this to shame me.

insanity rose,
you were walking far.
a mere dose
you left a scar.

nothing left but sorrow
for there might not be a tommorow

About this poem

this poem is about the loss of love.

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Written on April 06, 2022

Submitted by fhilip on April 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC XC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 299
Words 76
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
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