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Best Sunday ever

Uswa Ali 2001 (Jhelum)

Dust off some peppers
On a pitty salmon

Sun ordered to make cocktails
Bun opened to make shockwaves

She is lit ,she is fire
Looking for someone with ocean eyes

A knock on the door
May b on her core

She welcomed her guest
With nostalgic smile

Laughing for hours for no reason
Remembering our mischiefs and griefs

Pretending  we don't know the time
As still its sunny out
 
May this Sunday  never ends
Its a day for paramours to come close.
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Written on June 04, 2022

Submitted on June 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AB XX XX CC XX BA XX XX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 450
Words 95
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
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