The fatherly advice

Muhammed L Ceesay 2000 (Churchill's town)



           The fatherly advice
As he was about to close his eyes.
Which have been opened for years.
He looked at the sky and said to me
"You are your brother's strength,
Be unto him like real friend,
When defamation strikes be there to defend,
Represent him till the end,
Lend not your ears to his enemies.
Their goal is to impair your relationship.
And their wish is to see you both in hardship.
So take heed my son. "

About this poem

It's about my dying father who motivated me to maintain the tie of kinsfolk. To be kind to my siblings.

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Written on July 20, 2022

Submitted by mceesay410 on July 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFFFGHHI
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 429
Words 88
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

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