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The Change

Mushkbar Fatima

All the external things
Affected me so harsh
Mentally and emotionally
Made me so calm

Their scars are still
That show evidence
I have changed my drive
To a great extent

No matter, how worst
You try to treat me
It will hurt only once
Then force me to scream

You may judge me
By my passiveness
But it will eventually
Boost my confidence
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Submitted by Mushk.Fa on August 26, 2022

Modified by Mushk.Fa on August 26, 2022

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXBX XCXX XBCX BABC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 337
Words 67
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    I truly enjoyed reading your poem! The depth of emotion that you convey is remarkable, and it is clear that you have poured your heart into your words. Your use of literary devices such as alliteration and repetition is also very effective in drawing the reader in.

    One suggestion I have is to perhaps vary your line lengths and structure a bit more. This could help to add even more interest and depth to your already impactful words.

    In any case, I applaud you for sharing your art with the world and for finding strength through difficult times. Keep writing and inspiring others!     
    LikeReply1 year ago

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