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Missing you

Flor Gallardo 1982 (Texas)

As I stand still in heaven,
With my arms open ,
I am free,
I am new ,
I am rejoicing,
A new me ,
With no pain,
Happiest as I can be ,
I look down at my despair,
I see tears,
Running through my family's eyes,
Do not be sadden,
I promise I am no longer suffering ,
I do not wish any sorrow on you ,
But Happiness,
Please be okay,
For I am always with you  

About this poem

Wrote this poem after I lost my brother . To comfort me and remind myself that it's going to be okay .

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Written on February 06, 2023

Submitted by flor_g on February 14, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Scheme AABCDBEBFGHADCIJC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 365
Words 90
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
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