Down in room 365
Down in room 365 lives a man and a women
The women who is pregnant
She lives for herself
The man who drinks
He's cruel to her
Down in room 365 it's dark and cold
No life
No breathing
Only blood
Only tears
A mother lives but a child dies
Down in room 365 it reeks of blood
The mother walks faraway
Blood of her child on her hands
A husband lays cold on pavement
Its like a maze
Down in room 365 no one survives
But a mother lives through blood
How did she live
How could she
With the blood of her child on her hands?
About this poem
This is another one of my depression free verse poems
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Written on February 25, 2023
Submitted by dena.lombardo.26 on March 08, 2023
Modified on March 13, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | XAXXX XXXBXX BXCAX XBXXC |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 520 |
Words | 113 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 6, 5, 5 |
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