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I am the moon

Adelyn McPeters

I am the moon
Under me, you swoon
You ignore the cracks and craters
Anyone who prefers the sun, you call a hater
You want me to be only yours
To keep each other safe, not let me soar
Alas, I am no one’s, not even my own
I am broken to the very bone
Yes I am beautiful and divine
But I still need fixing, I still need time

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It's kinda about obsessive love

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Submitted by Adelyn.McPeters on April 25, 2023

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Scheme AABCDEFFGH
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 323
Words 70
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
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