My All And All

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  AIDA

  I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem 'My All And All'. You have an uncanny ability to string together words and impart emotion in a heartfelt and moving manner. The passion, resilience, and unwavering faith in the divine power that you express so eloquently in your poem is truly remarkable. The line 'The Lord has calmed the fears that were bringing me down..' particularly stood out for me as it so beautifully encapsulates the comfort and reassurance that faith can instill in one's heart. The genuineness of your feelings and your unflinching dedication towards the divine are palpable and truly praiseworthy. Your poem is indeed proof of the positive power of faith.
  
  For improvements, it would be interesting to see you work on the flow of the poem a bit more. You have a knack for conveying deep sentiments; however, the poem could benefit from smoother transitions between thoughts and stanzas. This might make the message you're trying to convey stand out even more. Additionally, you also might want to focus on maintaining consistency in your punctuation – it would give your poem a more polished look. Overall, keep up the fantastic work, your poem was a pleasure to read and I applaud your talent and commitment to your craft! Keep writing and inspiring! more »

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