The love I wish u would see

Iwande Nel 2006 (South Africa)



She herself have let the love of a man consume her.
She saw me , she felt me ,unfortunately  She could not let the thoughts of others come through
The feeling of souls that's been searching for one another in so many worlds.
She lit my heart on fire and left it unseen
For now I am in pieces and she's in the arms of a man she tries to love, not wanting to face the thought of me.
Call me unholy ,a witch  and a disappointment but if I get to love her I'll take hell and turn it into heaven for the soul of hers

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a Girl inlove with a girl leaving her for a man to hide from what the world would think and say about her I she confessed her about who she loves

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Written on June 20, 2023

Submitted by neliwande on August 22, 2023

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