Whispers Beneath the Cosmic Veil

Oscar Auliq-Ice 1994 (Port Elizabeth)



In the alleys where secrets intertwine,
If she were not a beacon, so divine,
You'd hold back, let no tale combine.
Yet, a hidden dance, in moonlight you dine,
A concealed rhythm, a melody benign.

Your once solitary chamber, alight with dreams,
Caressed by celestial wonders and moonbeams,
Pillows narrate tales, where emotion teems,
From every edge, where the stardust gleams,
A symphony of existence, in endless streams.

The universe observes, nothing can stall,
The fervor, the pursuit, life's grand ball.
Reveal your stories, echo them in the hall,
In my verses, they'll forever enthrall,
A dance among stars, love's eternal call.
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Written on October 21, 2023

Submitted by Auliq-Ice on November 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAAA BBBBB CCCCC
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 635
Words 118
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5

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