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I

J.Gathange 2008 (Dandora)

I am moving closer
Free spirit roaming around
The innocence of a child
The brighter of a sun
I hardly want to stop
Pleasure make me forget
I look around
I am left all alone
My dreams are gone
I will never be anything
God knows the rest
I will never see the light
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Written on November 29, 2023

Submitted by Jokelysonme on November 28, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFBGHIJK
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 270
Words 61
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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  • RonaldBunch
    RonaldBunch
    Never give up hope. Nice write.
    LikeReply5 months ago

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