Duckabush



The Duckabush is a special place to me,

I sought its banks in a time of grief;
The lack of vistas and the grandiose,
Replaced by the solemnity of the forest floor
With its moss and ferns and the river’s roar.

I had lost my father a few weeks before
And had come to be alone with my anger,
To commune with my feelings of hopelessness
Among the moss and the ferns on the forest floor,
To sit and listen to the river’s roar.

I climbed big hump, left the rest behind
And arrived again at the river’s edge,
Among the solitude of the towering trees
Alone I thought of all that my father meant to me,
Among the moss and the ferns and the river’s roar.

About this poem

Another in a small series of poems inspired by my father who I lost nearly 30 years ago. Like is my nature, when this loss occurred, I retreated and the Olympic Mountains of my home state Washington, which is always where I go for a week or more of solitude. In the lesser traveled areas and trails you can go a week without seeing another person (not as much as years past, but early spring there is still an opportunity for solitude).

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Submitted by GCTHOMAS on January 23, 2024

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Scheme A XXBB BXXBB XXXAB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 655
Words 139
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 5, 5

GCThomas

Lover of mountains, gardening, and simple living. A social worker & mental health professional by day; a poet by night. more…

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