The day you went away



The day you went away
You took a piece of my heart with you

The day you left us
We didn't got a reason
We didn't got a chance to say goodbye

Why does life has to be so cruel?
They say life is a buffet so get your fill
But what about the people who don't have the will?

I could only imagine the kind of place you are in
But I know! I know the way you laughed the way you cared
I know where you wanted to see me and I will make sure you see that coz ik u will be here

You will be greatly missed in this world
Coz this world know how great of a person you were

As I look back at the time we had
I know you wouldn't want us to be sad

I just wish I could hug you one more time
I could dance with you one more time
I could laugh with you one more time
Don't know why you went away
There's so much I had to say

The day you went away
You took a piece of my soul with you
But I'm glad... I'm glad atleast I know what kind of a thinking for life you had.
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Submitted by Diyaa1_503 on February 05, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Ab xxx xcc xxx xx dd eeeaa Abd
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 956
Words 227
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 3, 3, 2, 2, 5, 3

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  • EdwinRayTanguma
    I don’t think I will ever fall for another narci my dear…Who may consider me a dead end one day and her next victim a burning bush…✌️⛄️
    LikeReply3 months ago

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