Fell so hard I died



If suicide ever crosses your mind call me
We'll do it together
Afterall everything we did together was fun
Atleast this will be the time we both fall for each other
Always wanted you to fall for me
But this wasn't how i imagined it
I can't make demands now, not in my position
I guess afterall, beggars can't be choosers
What if i die and you don't ?

Used to think i'd live to die another day
But now I wanna die to live to another day
I felt dead when i was alone, without you
Now as i jump off of the cliff ,  i feel alive
Who's blood it this?..... Oh it's mine
It's eerily red, red as wine
You always looked wonderful in red
But now that you're soaked in my blood
You don't look so good, i wonder why?
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Written on March 29, 2024

Submitted by Hiwalekartik281105 on March 29, 2024

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Scheme ABCBAXCXX DDXXEEXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 711
Words 148
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 9, 9

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