faulty until we are served



until we are served
faulty responsibility
than appointment
faulty activity
than go-ahead
faulty pray
than prayer
faulty night
than sleep
faulty sleep
than dream
faulty dream
than day
faulty day
than walk

until we are served
faulty wisdom
than wise
faulty time
than timer
faulty music
than singer
faulty happenings
than wishes


until we are served
faulty cup
than team
faulty playground
than fame
faulty promise
than enemy,

any activities are
in great danger
than in mercy-hand,
hence
we don't deserve
to have martyrdom/ martyrs
and parenthood/ parents.

i amnot sure about the formers,
i can assure you the latter do believe, endorse so.
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Written on April 25, 2024

Submitted by Yuknno.ghirmay on April 25, 2024

Modified by Yuknno.ghirmay on April 25, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Abxbxcxxddeeccx Axfxgxgxx Axexxxb xgxxxxx fx
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 640
Words 113
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 15, 9, 7, 7, 2

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