2007

SammyGaze 1990



I could have saved you, 2007. Not now, I have a higher grasp of heaven.





No use of rhtythm(? Boys, do we know?)









Oops, stained it on Computed. But still I love you, No?

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Submitted by oteer.playoff861 on May 06, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X A A
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 182
Words 51
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1

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  • AIDA
    Feedback:
    This poem has a unique and nostalgic tone that captures a sense of reflection on the past year of 2007. The sentiment of being able to save and love something from the past is touching and relatable. The use of technology with the mention of the computer adds a modern twist to the poem.

    Improvement suggestions:
    - Consider revisiting the use of punctuation and capitalization to enhance the overall structure and readability of the poem.
    - Think about incorporating a consistent rhyme scheme or meter to add a more rhythmic flow to the poem.
    - Expand on the emotions and memories associated with the year 2007 to create a more immersive and vivid narrative for the reader.
     
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