Grandmother



Grandmother

Grandmother smelled
…of fertile black soil and salted pork;
harvested collard greens from her garden
rich in Oklahoma mountain minerals
sautéed in pork fat from the neighbor’s slaughtered pig
traded for a mason pint jar of moonshine
mellowed in the root cellar among jars
of canned tomatoes, chow-chow, sauerkraut and winter slaw.

Grandmother smelled
…of flour sack cotton;
sewn together for aprons, summer dresses and quilts
of wedding ring, Dutch girl and star designs
sewn on a foot pedal powered singer sewing machine
tucked among piles of folded cotton scraps
and a blue ticking covered cotton mattress
 in the shed with dirt floors
and plank walls through whose cracks
grape arbor scents and train whistle smoke
wafted in and spun dreams of faraway
city sights, sounds and smells;
tantalizing images of silk and satin scented life.

Grandmother smelled
…of strong percolated coffee
black – like the wood burning stove and heavy cast iron she cooked with
black – like her waist length hair; plaited then worn like a garland gay
black – like her Black Foot ancestry
black – like the soil covering nine baby graves
black – like the secret; her maiden and married names were the same
black – like her beautiful skin and eyes
black – like the secrets and lies whispered by adults.

Their stories long buried and silent
along with their bodies now rotten
but this I know and have never forgotten;

my grandmother smelled
…of a warm, safe place to rest, play and be nourished.
…of an exquisite, designer perfume, a divine formulary
not of a dime store toilet water essence of rose.
…of eighty-three years of caring more for her family than for herself.
…like a hug, an embrace of belonging.

About this poem

The poem is a time capsule to capture the memory of grandmother and the powerful effect of scent on recalling the memories.

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Written on January 13, 2024

Submitted by Cartwrid on April 01, 2024

1:31 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme Axbxxxxx Abxxxxxxxxcxx Adxcdxxxx xbb axdxxx
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,736
Words 305
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 13, 9, 3, 6

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12 Comments
  • Philipo
    Congrats.
    LikeReply13 days ago
  • npirandy
    Congratulations Debra. This paints an exquisite picture of a lovely lady. The imagery is first rate.
    LikeReply21 days ago
  • susan.brumel
    I absolutely love this piece. I feel like I knew your grandmother. Great work.
    LikeReply21 days ago
  • Vixility
    Excellent imagery, nostalgic and a well written piece. Congratulations on the win!
    LikeReply21 days ago
  • hamiltonkim03
    Congratulations on getting first prize. A beautiful poem about grandmother. Grandmother had a rich life by the sounds of it. Reminds me of my own grandmother. Kim
    LikeReply21 days ago
  • Symmetry60
    Congrats, Debra. Great job! :-)
    LikeReply21 days ago
  • bkurple
    iT REMINDED ME OF MY OWN GRANDMOTHER
    LikeReply21 days ago
  • DougHaberman
    Stunningly evocative tribute, heartfelt and full of excellent imagery.
    LikeReply21 days ago
  • Cindy577211399
    I like the flow and artistic expression of this poem.
    LikeReply21 days ago
  • dougb.72572
    So much vivid detail on a loving and loveable old woman of one's cherished past.
    LikeReply21 days ago
  • LesleyJane
    Very descriptive and wonderful choice of words. Visually appealing. I could see her sewing. I could smell her cooking. I could feel her energy, her endurance. Her labour of love and above all her loving warm hug. So many wonderful poems, it was a hard decision. Well done everyone. 
    LikeReply21 days ago
  • Bnangel35
    The descriptions of grandmother make you feel like are there. You see, feel, hear and smell this poem. It's poetry speaking of family and beautiful memories. The world needs more of this for sure . 
    LikeReply21 days ago

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