February 17th, 2023/3rd Iteration



February 17th, 2023

3rd Iteration

In Memory of Floyd Russell Taylor

I commemorate him here where he lays
Stilled, in a room apart from the wailing
Ruined, born under runes of misfortune.
A bird from the sill alights into flight,
While high in the blue bright, her winged kin
Cartwheel joyfully as his spirit joins
Their swell, delaying Heaven for a day,
Perhaps a night.  Among the plebeians
He sees a hapless “Steves,” his happiness
Utterly forsaken, though he be not.
If the ceiling be uncovered to sight
A hovering Russ, the knots of sorrow
In his heart could be undone, utterly.
A plot of grief should hold a hope like gold,
Not ash, as if hope lie dashed. Sting these words
Into the tombstones.  Let them gleam, glisten.

Listen to Steve sing, then dance your answer.

About this poem

Shorter, and easier to understand than the first two iterations, as well as the fourth.

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Written on January 28, 2024

Submitted by Centaur99 on April 10, 2024

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Scheme X A XXBCXXXXXXCXXXXB A
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 783
Words 152
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 16, 1

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  • Symmetry60
    Beautiful writing. And that my name is used only makes the decision easier. Well done. ;-)
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