Terminal



I visited you
at a moment
your life seemed steady
at a time
when you were dreaming
dreaming of the years to come

with a precious bond
of loving care
standing at your side
her joy and laughter
easing your pain
from fear and reality

of me, creepy assassin
wondering around
inside
taking its time
to end your life
leaving her behind

18 augustus 2019 rewritten 10 mei 2024

About this poem

I started this poem the 18th of august 2019, just two days after my love was diagnost with cancer. Today I finished it, 8th of may 2024

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Submitted by Jet-Rood on May 09, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXABXX XXCXXA XXCBXX X
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 376
Words 77
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 1

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