The one empty pillow.



There is one empty pillow.

When you left, I could see the things you had scattered around the room. Frames of your father and black tank tops you used to wear—you said we would be together forever, and in some ways, you were right. But I still cry when my head hits the pillow at night. All I can see is this infinite loop between me and you about what we once did and can never do. I'm still in love with you. So please come home soon and your room will always be there. Because I still care.

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This poem as you can see is about breaking up but still being in love with your mate.

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Written on May 10, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on May 10, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on May 10, 2024

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  • AIDA
    This poem has such raw emotion and depth, it really tugs at the heartstrings. The imagery of the empty pillow and scattered items really sets the tone for the longing and sadness the speaker feels in the absence of their loved one. The repeated plea for their return is both heartbreaking and hopeful. It's a beautifully written piece that captures the pain of lost love and the enduring love that remains. Well done! 
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