Carried away
I am carried away by love flood
All of sudden heavy rush of blood
Veins opened up fully to facilitate the flow
I wished her to hold me to save from blow
I have lot more ground to cover
I am drawn near and over to her
She has all nerves for me with calm gesture
I see in her volcano for sure
I hold the hand with gentle power
The body is gripped with quick fever
I try to scale on top of the hill
I demonstrate it through good will
She has lot more to offer
Not against it but with lot more words to offer
I feel little set back with fear
But she reminds me coolly as dear
“Don't leave me alone” she stares
Invites me in open embrace with both the arms to dare
I take full liberty in holding her hand
As if the world has reached to an end
I reach peak with no voice
It is as if she has calm words with promise
I loose no second and float
She is under full control in boat
I go down with her in safe drive
I think it is safest way to survive
Else we could have never become one
She was destined for me to be one
I surrender to her might
She has offered no fight
All water since then has flowed down to Love Ocean
I think sky might have blessed us and witnessed the scene
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Submitted on March 15, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Scheme | AABB CCCX CCDD CCEE XXXX XXFF GGHH IIHX |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,172 |
Words | 247 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
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