Analysis of My last poem for you
This is my last one I do for you
The love of my life
I wanted to make you my wife
I will love you forever till I die
At first you were shy
The moment we locked eyes
U gave me butterflies
So I had to make you mine
I really miss those times
But over time
Iv corrupted ur mind
All the drugs we tried
I pulled us back every time
Been homeless 3 times
But u stayed by my side
That's my ride or die
But somewhere along the line
You decide to go outside
Mess with other guys
I guess
No reply at all is better than a lie
I should have seen the signs
But I tried to deny it
I don't want to turn away a baby
He is innocent and I love him just the same
I am sorry my baby daddy is broken and shamed
I wish it didn't have to be this way
I can't tell how bad I wanna cry
But my eyes have run dry
Now All I can do is sigh
Nothing is the same
But I still tried
I still love you
I love being a daddy
I love having a family
We have beautiful babies
They are my everything
What makes me happy
But I can't sleep
Cuz my mind is crowded
I been praying to Jesus
To just let me fall asleep
Please god Grant me the strength
So I can be at peace
Scheme | ABBCCDDEFGHIGFICEIDJCKLMNOPCCCNIAMMQRMSTUSVW |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111111111 01111 11011111 1111010111 11101 010111 11110 1111111 110111 1101 101011 10111 11111001 1101 111111 11111 110101 111111 11101 11 10111110101 111101 1111011 1111101010 111000111101 11101101011001 1111011111 111111101 111111 1111111 10101 1111 1111 1110010 11100100 1110010 11110 11110 1111 111110 1110110 1111101 111101 111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,135 |
Words | 261 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 44 |
Lines Amount | 44 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 867 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 249 |
About this poem
It's about heartbreak and pure emotions
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Written on July 02, 2020
Submitted by Cursid1 on March 07, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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