Analysis of My mother saw me for what I was



My mother saw me for what I was
A coward who has lost her voice
Shriveling in an empty shell
Crying to be let out of shackles and chains
My mother saw me for what I was
And she exploited the weakness she saw
Blackmail and word were sure
Pain already a blinding blur
My mother saw me for what I was
And she was revolted by what she saw
My cry a foil for small empathy
My anger a pointless joke
My mother saw me for what I was
Thought I didn't love her for what she was
Thought I intentionally don't hid to the word she sought
Thinking me an evil person to the core


Scheme AbcdAefgAehiAajk
Poetic Form
Metre 110111111 01011101 10001101 10111111001 110111111 011001011 10101 10100101 110111111 0110101111 110111100 1100101 110111111 1110101111 11010001110111 10111010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 566
Words 120
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 445
Words per stanza (avg) 117
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Submitted by Chukura on September 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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