Analysis of Twinkle twinkle waiting stars



Twinkle twinkle waiting stars
Lovely daddy where you are
I am waiting for you
But you is too far
Twinkle twinkle waiting stars
Lovely daddy where you are
Little angle waiting for you
Also moon and stars
Twinkle twinkle waiting stars
Lovely daddy where you are
Mumma is telling that you is in war
And sleep forever in a star
Twinkle twinkle waiting stars
Lovely daddy where you are
I am waiting for you
But you is too far
You are my superstar
Like a brighten star
Twinkle twinkle waiting stars
Lovely daddy where you are
I am waiting for you
Come fast from far
Mumma is waiting for you
Little angel moon and stars
Twinkle twinkle waiting stars
Lovely daddy where you are.


Scheme ABCBABcaABdbABCBbbABCbcaAB
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 1010111 111011 11111 1010101 1010111 10101011 10101 1010101 1010111 1011011101 01010001 1010101 1010111 111011 11111 11101 10101 1010101 1010111 111011 1111 1011011 1010101 1010101 1010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 695
Words 148
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 546
Words per stanza (avg) 124

About this poem

This poem is about that child who is very sad and missing his dad who passed away in war.

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Written on September 14, 2022

Submitted by Varsharajput8527 on September 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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