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Twinkle twinkle waiting stars

Pushkar

Elegy
Twinkle twinkle waiting stars
Lovely daddy where you are
I am waiting for you
But you is too far
Twinkle twinkle waiting stars
Lovely daddy where you are
Little angle waiting for you
Also moon and stars
Twinkle twinkle waiting stars
Lovely daddy where you are
Mumma is telling that you is in war
And sleep forever in a star
Twinkle twinkle waiting stars
Lovely daddy where you are
I am waiting for you
But you is too far
You are my superstar
Like a brighten star
Twinkle twinkle waiting stars
Lovely daddy where you are
I am waiting for you
Come fast from far
Mumma is waiting for you
Little angel moon and stars
Twinkle twinkle waiting stars
Lovely daddy where you are.

About this poem

This poem is about that child who is very sad and missing his dad who passed away in war.

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Written on September 14, 2022

Submitted by Varsharajput8527 on September 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBABcaABdbABCBbbABCbcaAB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 695
Words 148
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
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