Analysis of While I Sleep

Noel M Hamzik 1962 (New York)



A blush of stardust blankets the town
People are sleeping peaceful and sound
Through the night they dream, non-reality connected
Not a word said leaves them affected
Dawn is near, there is a rising fear
Debt and worry, status and glory


Scheme ABCCDE
Poetic Form
Metre 01111001 101101001 10111110010 101111010 111110101 101010010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 235
Words 41
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 191
Words per stanza (avg) 41

About this poem

This poem was written when I was a young mother with many responsibilities and hopes and dreams, living with ridicule and criticism daily and always moving forward to my hopes and dreams, regardless.

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Written on 1998

Submitted by hamziktimothy on December 13, 2022

Modified by hamziktimothy on December 15, 2022

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