Analysis of Missing Someone



When you miss someone,
Breathing is half of what it should be
And your heart struggles to beat.

You realize they make you
Exhale and you feel lighter
When they’re around.

The breeze blows softer,
Water quenches the parched lips
And the rain feels light as petals.

So when I say I miss you
There is more than just a part of me
Somewhere else with you.

Imagine all the happiness,
Peace and pleasure we feel and share
Whispering I love you where you go.

You are everything to me
Beautiful and every dream come true
Because I know you miss me, too.

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
* No part of this poem may be used or reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted in any way or form or by any means electronic, mechanical, recording, or otherwise without the written permission of the author.*


Scheme XAX BCX CXX BAB XXX ABB XC
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Metre 1111 101111111 0111011 110111 0101110 1101 01110 1010011 00111110 1111111 111110111 1111 01010100 10101101 100111111 111011 1000100111 01111111 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 837
Words 170
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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Missing someone you love who loves you, too

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Written on April 24, 2023

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on April 24, 2023

Modified on April 24, 2023

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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