Analysis of Missing Someone
When you miss someone,
Breathing is half of what it should be
And your heart struggles to beat.
You realize they make you
Exhale and you feel lighter
When they’re around.
The breeze blows softer,
Water quenches the parched lips
And the rain feels light as petals.
So when I say I miss you
There is more than just a part of me
Somewhere else with you.
Imagine all the happiness,
Peace and pleasure we feel and share
Whispering I love you where you go.
You are everything to me
Beautiful and every dream come true
Because I know you miss me, too.
Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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Scheme | XAX BCX CXX BAB XXX ABB XC |
---|---|
Poetic Form | Etheree (40%) |
Metre | 1111 101111111 0111011 110111 0101110 1101 01110 1010011 00111110 1111111 111110111 1111 01010100 10101101 100111111 111011 1000100111 01111111 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 837 |
Words | 170 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 32 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 91 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 21 |
About this poem
Missing someone you love who loves you, too
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Written on April 24, 2023
Submitted by charlesedwardyork on April 24, 2023
Modified on April 24, 2023
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