Analysis of Down By The River



Down by the river
Next to the willow tree
I washed away all the pain
And all the memories

Down by the river
It’s time my soul was clean
I might forgive and might forget                       
But some things can’t be unseen
.                 
Down by the river
There’s no tears in my eyes
I used to think, that we were in sync
But there was no compromise

Down by the river
Where glass shards turn to sand
I find myself with nothing left
But my will to understand

Down by the river
I lay down by the edge
I say goodbye One last time
My peace is my revenge

Down by the river
I start to walk away
The sun has set, to a silhouette
Of a new and better day


Scheme Axxx Abcb Adxd Aexe Axxx Afcf
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11010 11011 1101101 010100 11010 111111 11010101 1111101 1 11010 111011 111111001 111110 11010 111111 1111101 111101 11010 111101 111111 111101 11010 111101 01111001 1010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 670
Words 144
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 9, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

I wrote this poem after losing a friendship with someone of 15 years. After the friendship ended, I threw everything I had that reminded me of her into the river by my house.

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Written on April 23, 2022

Submitted by chelseal.09801 on May 13, 2023

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Chelsea Lucas

I'm from a big city, but I was never really allowed to go outside as a child. It wasn't safe for kids, I grew up in the kind of area where gang violence and murders are normal, so I used my writing as a form of escape. more…

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