Analysis of WILTED



these roses bloom in agony
and leave a trail to eternity,
the kind of trail love would take
my feet against the luminescent petals
the thorns against my feet
nevertheless, I continue wandering
watch how my blood stains the world
as I move through this unending abyss!
my ignorance seems like a bliss
and my weary heart marvels
in the symphony of doom I'm getting into
but I find beauty in such sadness
and I know I'm beautifully fated
to such a place where
roses like me bloom everyday
only to die in the end
and the scent of death
tears love apart


Scheme AABCDEFGGCHIJKLMNO
Poetic Form
Metre 11010100 010110100 0111111 1101001010 010111 0011010100 1111101 1111101001 11001101 0110110 001001111001 111100110 011110010 11011 10111101 1011001 00111 1101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 548
Words 105
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 441
Words per stanza (avg) 103

About this poem

This poem was inspired by a graphic image I saw on Pinterest a while ago. Unfortunately, I can't attach it here but it was a deep image, portraying a trail of luminescent roses.

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Written on July 26, 2023

Submitted by sabrinafeliscity on July 26, 2023

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