Analysis of Why do I care
Hiding my stomach with a pillow when I sit on the coach
Changing my top cause my stomach sticks out
The shame that we feel as women today
I obsess over my looks all night and day
I don't judge myself for my wrinkles or spots
I don't hate myself when I'm bruised or my hair is in knots
But i gain just 1 pound and I spiral and cry
I tell my friends I feel fine, as I hastily lie
Why do I think I should look the same as I did when I was twenty
I'm human I change and tell myself plenty
But no matter what I say those thoughts they sneek in
Im ugly and worthless cause of my double chin
I tell my friends honestly they look great even if they gained weight
But don't give myself the same grace, self thoughts full of hate
What will make me feel better is being skinny I think
So I run to the gym and throw food in the sink
Tears run down my face after one gym session doesn't work
I'm still feeling shit are my feeling berserk
I think others say I look nice but I really don't hear it
I look at everyone else and wish I was that fit
Scheme | XXAA BBCC DDEE FFGG HHII |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (80%) |
Metre | 101101010111101 1011111011 0111111001 10110111101 1111111011 1111111111101 11111011001 1111111111001 11111110111111110 1101101110 111011111110 110010111101 1111100111101111 111101111111 11111101101011 111101011001 11111101110101 11101111001 111011111110111 111101011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,036 |
Words | 222 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 40 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 161 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 43 |
About this poem
I am a 30 year old women who was slim when younger and an struggling with ageing and gaining weight and see this mirrored in friends
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