Analysis of We the Vampires

Christian 1983 (VA)



Was then a hopeful brat
Was an optimist
Thought we’d all blossom perfectly
My optimism fed into this hard
becoming indolent

And so I spiral
Inward a mile
And slowly reveal
A tragic autophile

I unknowingly carry “Americas” bags
A privileged past, I’m it’s successor    
Demographics still in rags
Ghostly Vampires, their oppressors

It’s no wonder I feel this way
My demographic so insolent
It was then as it is today
And so I hate that I’m indolent


Scheme XXAXB XXXA CXCX DBDB
Poetic Form
Metre 110101 11100 11110100 110010111 010100 01110 1001 01001 0101 101001001001 010111010 010101 10101010 11101111 10101100 11111101 011111100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 473
Words 90
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

An ad lib internal dialog about certain unlikeable characteristics

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Written on October 16, 2023

Submitted by christianm.01551 on October 16, 2023

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