We the Vampires

Christian 1983 (VA)



Was then a hopeful brat
Was an optimist
Thought we’d all blossom perfectly
My optimism fed into this hard
becoming indolent

And so I spiral
Inward a mile
And slowly reveal
A tragic autophile

I unknowingly carry “Americas” bags
A privileged past, I’m it’s successor    
Demographics still in rags
Ghostly Vampires, their oppressors

It’s no wonder I feel this way
My demographic so insolent
It was then as it is today
And so I hate that I’m indolent

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Written on October 16, 2023

Submitted by christianm.01551 on October 16, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAXB XXXA CXCX DBDB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 473
Words 90
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4

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