Analysis of Rejected Stone

Osakue Omoera 1973 (Benin City)



Gather those stones

And polish them all but this I forbid you

Do as I instruct

Docility is your portion

How long will I drum this?

Take no cognizance of my mouthing

I’m hamstrung at nourishing you

I don’t know the crime in you

To deserve this grim short-changing

But drawing you nigh I will

And nursing you, I will too

Staking my breath for you

With my meagre mite

For your mien is auspicious

And angst twines me like a passionflower

Does a palm tree

To see your diamond body lay unpolished.


Scheme X A B X X C A A C X A A X X D D B
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 01011111011 11101 01001110 111111 111001110 11011001 1110101 10111110 1101111 0101111 101111 1111 1111010 0111101 1011 111101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 512
Words 99
Sentences 3
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 23
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Modified on March 10, 2023

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