Storm In Watercolor



I remember you then,
Standing boldly against
the blaze of color licking
at your form -

And you in that simple white dress -

Crowning the horizon
in an array of windblown wonder.
You open your eyes,
deep wells into the heart of fury -

Gray to match the storm -

And stare into ocean's never imagined
thundering toward you, always receding with the tide.
The mist of the storm cups your brow into proudly
held defiance, your flaxen
hair billowing trails
across the watercolor of my remembrance.

About this poem

Sometimes poetic inspiration comes when a memory clashes with an image. This poem came from the idea of a single memory captured in an instant and put on paper.

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Written on April 19, 2023

Submitted by JaceSon on April 19, 2023

Modified on May 02, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXB X XXXC B XXCAXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 495
Words 96
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 1, 4, 1, 6

JaceSon P. Barrus

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and vivid poem! Your use of descriptive language creates an incredibly immersive experience for the reader. I love the imagery of the storm and ocean, and how you've painted such a stunning portrait of the subject in the simple white dress.

    If I had to offer any suggestions for improvement, it might be helpful to clarify the meaning or intention behind the poem. As it stands, it is very evocative but feels a little ambiguous. Perhaps adding a few lines of personal reflection or emotion could deepen the impact of the piece. Nevertheless, it is a stunning work of art and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Keep up the fantastic work!
     
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